Field of flames
It was a bitter cold morning in Los Angeles, I got up early for something special. I snuck down the stairs to eat some breakfast then I got changed and ran out the door without making a noise.
I had been walking down the street for about 15 minutes, and I noticed a little dog sitting on the side of the road. He was a tan coloured chihuahua. I bent down to have a look at him. The chiwawa was cold and it looked hungry so i picked him up and ran home with him.
By now, my family was all gone so i got a blanket and some food and comforted the dog for about an hour. After I remembered that I was making my way to the field of ... to be continued.
hi I really liked how you used instesing words next time maybe described how you felt but I think it was good. And I really like dogs because they are playful and why did you choices a chiwawa out of all of the dogs in the world???
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ReplyDeleteI like that story but I didn't like how it made me sad.
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