Taylor @ Oratia District School

this week we have been learning about paragraphs and when to start a new paragraph  ,  for example a nae paragraph always starts with T.P.T.P  which means time place topic person . time as in when someone changes the time for instance ( the next day ) . place as changing where the scene is in the story or when you change the room you're in. topic as in when someone  changes the topic in the story,person as in when they change the main person or just   a new person comes into the story  here are my sentences -> the classroom was full with lots of different furniture  we have chrome books and chairs and pillows and and lots of type of furniture some chrome books where white like snow some where black as darknes and some where blue like the sky and chairs and pillows and blue as the sea . the chrome books are used to do work on the web like spider surfing the webs they make chairs and pillows are used to sit on when you tired the ...

The best out of my conference was that i got to share it with my mum . When i first started i felt weird and funny just a little scared but in the end i felt proud . I shared  my reading , my writing , my new goals and my maths and those are what i shared with my mum. My mum gave me great feed back she said that she was proud of me and she wants me to step it up . Next time i will just talk to my mum than just showing my mum . Stop being so scared of what my mum will think and focus on whats inportant next time i will always focus on what i'm doing.