my 3 paragraphs

this week we have been learning about paragraphs and when to start a new paragraph  ,  for example

a nae paragraph always starts with T.P.T.P  which means time place topic person . time as in when someone changes the time for instance ( the next day ) .

place as changing where the scene is in the story or when you change the room you're in. topic as in when someone  changes the topic in the story,person as in when they change the main person or just  

a new person comes into the story 

here are my sentences -> the classroom was full with lots of different furniture 

we have chrome books and chairs and pillows and and lots of type of furniture
some chrome books where white like snow some where black as darknes and some where blue like the sky and chairs and pillows and blue as the sea . the chrome books are used to do work on the web like spider surfing the webs they make chairs and pillows are used to sit on when you tired


the playground at oratia primary school is amazing
there where monkey bars and a jungle gym
the monkey bars are as green as the grass and the jungle gym was as titanium as the melt
the monkey bars are used for you to be a  monkey if you want and the jungle you can be any animal you want to be .


the school swimming pool is down back by room 15
its as blue as you could imagin
and its used for you to dive in to your imagination and explore